Well I thought this was just charming!!! And you said you can't write females! ^^;;; I think all the Yukari love came through, because this was sweet. In a way bittersweet too, because reading it, I almost wish that the relationship was still possible for them..... T_T

And I liked hearing about all the settings, because I could connect on a personal and emotional level. So putting the two of them there was so nice! But I really think you captured the essence of both of them, even if you don't feel like you did. I could actually hear Yukari saying the majority of her dialogue! (And that made me kind of sad. :( Like the "Nao-kun is amazing"...)